The tabular graph compares usage of rail transport system in 2007.

Essay topics:

The tabular graph compares usage of rail transport system in 2007.

the tabular data depicts the use of rail transport system in order to carry cargo and as a transportation mode for people in main four countries, in fall of 2007.

Over the period as a whole, Japanese people were at the top in using railway transport system among four countries whereas America had carried around more than 2500 billion tons of cargo in the same year. (2007)

In detail, Japanese people used rail transport in the greater frequency as compared to other countries. 27 number of people had traveled via rail transport - statistic doesn't include Metro passengers - in the fall of 2007, in Japan. While the ratio of railway passengers in UK and Italy for approximately same, as it was only 5.7 in the same year.

Repeatedly, the aforementioned phenomena again took place while 'number of kilometre travelled by each passenger' were observed. Markedly, Japanese person travelled around 1980 kilometre in the year, which was actually three-fold than that kilometre travelled by people in UK or Italy. (775 approximately)

Nevertheless, in the case of USA, it had leaded these all countries by carrying 2820 billion tons cargo in fall of 2007, but the number of people travelled by rail transport was significantly low. For rest of the three countries, an average weight of cargo carried out was almost same - on an average 22.5 billion tons.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...traveled via rail transport - statistic doesnt include Metro passengers - in the fall ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'whereas', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.285140562249 0.268076937826 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.112449799197 0.116061578633 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0763052208835 0.0759168565197 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0361445783133 0.0366838410393 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00803212851406 0.0131127313244 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.196787148594 0.155750635184 126% => OK
Participles: 0.0401606425703 0.0379272487307 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76749520351 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00803212851406 0.0210936926555 38% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00401606425703 0.00175180941692 229% => OK
Determiners: 0.0883534136546 0.0948980150116 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00401606425703 0.00967000014798 42% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1354.0 1161.00487805 117% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.9 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93859649123 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73763899035 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342105263158 0.337110787985 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245614035088 0.247514529752 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175438596491 0.171178102325 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144736842105 0.112407865282 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76749520351 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.546246751206 99% => OK
Word variations: 50.4294895667 49.3433353143 102% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.3333333333 23.0094962315 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.870477333 42.9750493124 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.444444444 135.714022679 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 23.0094962315 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.689975730869 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 49.8947368421 47.7609492067 104% => OK
Elegance: 3.33333333333 2.94281807926 113% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412710045528 0.418131533498 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.18813219566 0.181151798455 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0479261663215 0.0850326197045 56% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.641667234976 0.706616315825 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.275781920479 0.157042692854 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22080754399 0.228904883108 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114418340782 0.108899403657 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.317424737374 0.367819155151 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0805548890943 0.0812612215331 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284121649694 0.316326947829 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107734084274 0.0921553760075 117% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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