Take a look at the graphics and complete the task.The charts show where people get their news and how much they trust these sources.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should spen

Essay topics:

Take a look at the graphics and complete the task.

The charts show where people get their news and how much they trust these sources.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The provided two bar graphs illustrate the percentages of people highly trust and do not trust in the six different sources of news. Moreover, the percentages of news sources used in the past week.

In summary, the higher percentages of people, who highly trust to the Local TV news; whereas, they do not trust to the Online-only sources.In the last week the highest source of the news used to the Local TV; whereas, the lowest source used to the Magazines.

Above 50% of people highly trust to the Local TV news, while, approximately 25% in the Online-only news. The maximum percentages of people do not trust in the Online-only sources (20% of people) and the minimum percentages of people do not trust in the Newspapers (almost 10%) and the Radio news(almost 10).

In past week, eighty percent of people preferred to the Local TV news. In contrast, approximately 40% of people preferred to the Magazines. In addition, the National network , Newspapers and Radio news preferred by near71%, 65% and 58% of the people respectively.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92528735632 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83935031373 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419540229885 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6827594881 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126721734198 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067384121638 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232552174871 0.0843802449381 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885852726436 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135169168877 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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