Task 1 The diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study area

Essay topics:

Task 1: The diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study area.

Given are the two maps depicting the layout of a single and double room for students.
It is perceptible that notwithstanding the high price, a double room has more facilities. Moreover, there are some moderate differences in size and structures between both kinds of rooms.
Evidently, a room for two students costs $350 per week, meanwhile, a student has to pay $200 per week for living in a single room. Additionally, whilst the length still remains at 6 meters for both, a double room reaches 4 meters wide compared to 2.5 meters for a single one.
With a pricey cost, a double room is equipped with more furniture such as one bookshelf and a table and chairs located opposite the kitchen. Furthermore, no lacking of kitchen facilities in both kinds of room like sink, stove and mỉcrowave. Due to its sizable space, a double room is more comfortable with two beds separated by two cupboards. In the interim, while there are two study desks situated in the North and South of the layout, a single one contains only one study desk which is opposite the TV in the bottom of the room.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, as to, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6875 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70705097846 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7350139611 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233438726843 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101893488803 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523024623355 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148395448279 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401550447215 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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