The two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different
ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons
where relevant
These two charts tells us the percentage of criminal executant between male and female from various age categories and the amount of prisoner based by gender in prison all around United Kingdom. Overall, we can see that most of the custody in Britain attain the age of 20 while jail are dominated by Male rather than female.
Principally, both men and women share a same trends for the age of criminal convictions. The aged of criminal is twenty for both of the gender. 14% of male perpetrator did their activity at 25 years old, followed by age 30 and 35 with 10% and 9%. On the other hand, in second position for woman filled by age 25 & 30 with 4%. Least of all are from kids and elderly people with only less than two percent. Furthermore, more than 90% of the prisoners in Great Britain are men and only 4% of the criminal are female.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, second, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 687.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43225806452 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37060781105 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0825320433 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149174093616 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650615738924 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581766616577 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124045106128 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200542803861 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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