Given are two maps illustrating the changes that took place in an island after construction of some tourist facilities.
From an overall perspective, The island witnessed a significant improvement, including swimming facilities, accommodation, reception and restaurant, etc, as it is expected to accommodate the purpose of vocation.
The length of island is over 1200 metres while its width varies from 200 to 200 metres in different place. Ordinary, there was a beach to the left of the island, and the eastern and western parts were covered with woodland, apart from which the island is completelt bare.
By contrast, In the south eage of the island a manual pier was builded, functioned as a entrance and accommodate the parking space for ships. In front of the pier is the reception house, there is also a restaurant in the north part, and a vehicle track linked restaurant and reception to pier. On the left hand of reception are accommodations, which are surround by trees, on the opposite, a bigger scale accommodation locate on the right hand of reception, both of accommodations were linked trough the footpath. Futhermore, some swimming facilities are builded near the beach in the west eage of the island, which are covenient for tourists in west acommodations through walking.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... manual pier was builded, functioned as a entrance and accommodate the parking sp...
^
Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'surrounded'.
Suggestion: surrounded
...reception are accommodations, which are surround by trees, on the opposite, a bigger sca...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18095238095 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06654835619 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3923454734 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145500274956 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070598458733 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926853771629 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115286545187 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107068727093 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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