It is sometimes argued that music plays an important role in bringing people of different ages or cultures together. In my opinion, I completely agreed that music would be an excellent bridge to bring people from different backgrounds together.
There are three main reasons that i believe music can bring people of different cultures together. Firstly, people ususally feel fascinated about unfamiliar culture, music created by musicians might be a symbol to reflect another different culture, so people who have a common interested in that culture tend to get together to share their opinions about it. For example, an Indian teacher and an Australian student became pen pal becasue they were all big fans of ancient chinese music, which is played by a traditional chinese instrument Xiao. Secondly, I believe music is essential in entertainment, such as a party, people from different cultures sang the same song together and danced to the rhythm. Lastly, I suppose music work as an alternative way to communicate, people could express their feelings by singing a song.
In the meantime, there are two reasons that can explain why different ages of people would like to get together due to music. Firstly, music accompanied by some special festivals, at that time, people would skip off all of work and spend time with families and friends together, no matter whether they are younger or older. For example, during the chinese lunar new year, the adults and children would sang a song named an unforgettable night together in order to celebrate that festival. Lastly, people have different ages might have a familiar taste for music, when a famous band holds a musical concert,such as Linkin Park, you can clearly see that audiences consist of different ages, apparently music bring them together.
In conclusion, I completely agree that music can work as a bridge to across gaps of cultures and ages. No matter where we are from, and no matter how old we are, I believe music truly bring us together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04804804805 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65422319269 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54954954955 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.033925368 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.307692308 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395670074158 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163522459303 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897924234756 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251424636114 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830260346023 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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