The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010

The two layouts compare the way to access a city hospital for the year 2007 and 2010. Various changes regarding to the nearby infrastructure are mentioned in the maps.

In an overview, it can be seen that there are lots of changes in the layout of a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. On one hand, where there is introduction of few new facilities while on the other hand some of the preexisting are removed too. However, some of the portions are left unchanged. Major changes are visible in the parking area near to the hospital. There is no change in the hospital area and the ring road which is to the north of hospital.

Majority of the changes made are on the south direction of city hospital and a new provision of car parking for public to the east of hospital across a road. In 2007, there are 6 bus stop, 3 on either side of the hospital road but is no more available in 2010, instead there is a new availability of huge bus station. There are two roundabouts in 2010 layout, one in front of the hospital and another at the crossing where the city road and the hospital road meets also both of them has a way to bus station. Neither of two are available in 2007 plan. In 2007, there is common parking area for public and staff but in 2010 that area is solely for the staff members.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... new facilities while on the other hand some of the preexisting are removed too. However, s...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e preexisting are removed too. However, some of the portions are left unchanged. Major chan...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'stops'?
Suggestion: stops
...across a road. In 2007, there are 6 bus stop, 3 on either side of the hospital road ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'stop' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'stops'.
Suggestion: stops
...across a road. In 2007, there are 6 bus stop, 3 on either side of the hospital road ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, regarding, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3237704918 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39393030626 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454918032787 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.970555173 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9166666667 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36117187891 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133999075653 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122742299481 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256863414547 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820527268863 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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