The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The maps illustrate how people can reach a city hospital in the years 2007 and 2010. Overall as it can be seen, bus stops changed to a bus station, public and staff car park is devided and two roundabouts is constructed.
As is given in the maps, a shared parking was assigned to both staff and people in 2007, but after the development, public parking area was moved to the east of the hospital, and staff car park remain constant in the previous location. Although, bus stops is removed from the hospital road and a bus station is built in the south-west of the city hospital that has two ports to be linked to roundabouts. Finally, two squares were located on the south of the main buildings of the city hospital in the hospital road across to city and ring road in the year 2010.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 640.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41379310345 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44498078407 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9636599939 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317481223277 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188126926371 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136590274487 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252647190746 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401644374115 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.89 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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