The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The maps below compare the road to the city hospital and the surrounding infrastructure in the year of 2007 and 2010.
Two roundabouts were built at the cross of City Road and Hospital Road, and the cross of Hospital Road and the city hospital respectively in 2010. And there were larger car park and bus station in 2010.
In 2007, there were only two main roads to the south of the city hospital, and the Hospital Road were straightly access to the city hospital. In 2010, two roundabouts and two branch roads were built, linking the hospital and the bus station. The Ring Road remained the same from 2007 to 2010.
The car park and the bus station also changed a lot over the 3 years. In 2007, there was only one car park for both public and staff at the east side of Hospital Road. While in 2010, the original car park was only for staff. A new public car park was built at the east of the city hospital. And a bus station was built in 2010, substituting for the six bus stops in 2007.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33689839572 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23138875379 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.385026737968 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6448456944 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7272727273 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461460318647 0.215688989381 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197637643196 0.103423049105 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15925977402 0.0843802449381 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.361804833007 0.15604864568 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147767491086 0.0819641961636 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.0 8.06136585366 74% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.