The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps represent the changes occurred in the facility of road to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall it is clear from the map that there was a huge development in the road access to the city hospital by a period of three years.
In 2007, there was only bus stops in either sides of the hospital road but it take way for the bus station and area for the staff car park in 2010. And another interesting difference occurred by a 3 year period since 2007 was the roundabout form to connect with the city road with hospital road, the bus station as well as city hospital.
Moreover, a public car park area is erected in the east of the city hospital in 2010, in order to prevent congestion in the parking area, which was absent in 2007. However, there was no any significant change in the ring road except a newly built entrance to the public park in 2010.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...ither sides of the hospital road but it take way for the bus station and area for th...
^^^^
Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... was absent in 2007. However, there was no any significant change in the ring road...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33128834356 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27801580688 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521472392638 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.7873872267 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239264833721 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141854135025 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640335112364 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176367207918 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541737940055 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...ither sides of the hospital road but it take way for the bus station and area for th...
^^^^
Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... was absent in 2007. However, there was no any significant change in the ring road...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33128834356 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27801580688 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521472392638 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.7873872267 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239264833721 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141854135025 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640335112364 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176367207918 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541737940055 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.