The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The provided two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in city hospital between 2007 and 2010 years.
Overall, it appears that the city hospital became much more modernization, with building more roundabouts and new transport facility.
One interesting change is that in 2007, the hospital car park was used by both staff and public because there was not any park area for people who came to the hospital but it was divided into two parts and the new huge public car park near the city hospital was built in 2010.
Another striking change is that there used to be six bus stops between two main roads in 2010.However, in the last seven years, they were demolished and two new roundabouts were constructed to connect between hospital road and city road. Also, a new big bus station to the west of the city hospital was introduced across to the staff car park in 2010.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...us stops between two main roads in 2010.However, in the last seven years, they were dem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74358974359 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41696420667 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6774704019 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339464361123 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191859498568 0.103423049105 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08206477966 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210169250917 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907530317812 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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