Two pictures of renovation plan compares two stages of pre - and post - development of it, converting as a two floor office plan. It is clearly seen that certain cabins were completely transformed.
Previously, it was different department small office. Afterwards various cabins transformed as a one huge office area. Firstly, account office near to processing office and new customers office was separate and all cabins have fax, copier and desk , which removed and become one huge desk area, where all department employees desk are available. Lunch, meeting and manager's office are at the same location. However, in west storage room, payroll office removed and in new plan relax area are included sofa. Furthermore, front desk was small previously, which constructed larger and with number off amenities like sofa and huge desk, in front of desk there are fax, copier machine put. Lastly, entrance remain with the same side.
Overall, AAA office has number of cabins in the past, which was transformed as a one beautiful office.
Two pictures of renovation plan compares two stages of pre - and post - development of it, converting as a two floor office plan. It is clearly seen that certain cabins were completely transformed.
Previously, it was different department small office. Afterwards various cabins transformed as a one huge office area. Firstly, account office near to processing office and new customers office was separate and all cabins have fax, copier and desk , which removed and become one huge desk area, where all department employees desk are available. Lunch, meeting and manager's office are at the same location. However, in west storage room, payroll office removed and in new plan relax area are included sofa. Furthermore, front desk was small previously, which constructed larger and with number off amenities like sofa and huge desk, in front of desk there are fax, copier machine put. Lastly, entrance remain with the same side.
Overall, AAA office has number of cabins in the past, which was transformed as a one beautiful office.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...ffice near to processing office and new customers office was separate and all cabins have...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faxed'.
Suggestion: faxed
...office was separate and all cabins have fax, copier and desk , which removed and be...
^^^
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and all cabins have fax, copier and desk , which removed and become one huge desk ...
^^
Line 3, column 661, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'faces', 'faxes'?
Suggestion: faces; faxes
...d huge desk, in front of desk there are fax, copier machine put. Lastly, entrance r...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23493975904 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64069787161 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620481927711 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6162520837 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448860113737 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171053696301 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179647163807 0.0843802449381 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.361749269931 0.15604864568 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.290685405784 0.0819641961636 355% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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