This report derives from the Pie chart, which illustrates online sales for important retail goods in Canada in 2005 & 2010. The diagram represented the electronic & appliances, food & beverages, home goods, and video games in four parts with varying percentages.
Generally speaking, in 2005, electronics & appliance projected a higher percentage as video games gain the lowest. In 2010, food & beverages mushroomed online sales, while home furnishing pertained to the lowest.
In 2005, the electronics & appliances gained 35% online sales; however, sales in 2010 decreased slightly to 30%. The online sales of video games in 2005 emphasize to 18%, but after five years it surges to 23%. Overall, the online sales percentage of electronics & appliance and video games were equal when they added in 2005 & 2010.
The online sales varied in some goods, and there was a dramatic fluctuation in between the percentages. Although in 2005, the food & beverages pertained 22% online sales, there was a tremendous change in 2010, which showed a difference of 10% between them. In opposite, the online sales of home furnishing were 25% in 2005, but it downgraded to 15% in 2010. The sum of percentages in 2005 & 2010 of food & beverages and home furnishing were equal.
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Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81382513911 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3852258329 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204988839329 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958618928892 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073503577082 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137380587457 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497541862808 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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