The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The above piechart illustrates the employment pattern in Great Britain in 1992. The pie charts shows the employment pattern in male and females. The pie chart further describes the composition of jobs in both male and female. It can be clearly seen that the distribution of male work force is quite higher than female workforce in craft. while clerical works is more prevalent in females employment category then males. Also in both the categories the distribution of general labourers is similar and is quite low.
From the pie chart can be further observed that non manual jobs consists of around 69% in females while in males the manual jobs distribution is about 50% which is 19% lower than female counterpart.
In summary, females are more inclined towards clerical works whereas their male compatriots are bound to perform more craft oriented works other than that they have perform similar job decompostions
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...employment pattern in male and females. The pie chart further describes the composi...
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... higher than female workforce in craft. while clerical works is more prevalent in fem...
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... higher than female workforce in craft. while clerical works is more prevalent in fem...
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... labourers is similar and is quite low. From the pie chart can be further observ...
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... can be further observed that non manual jobs consists of around 69% in females w...
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...9% in females while in males the manual jobs distribution is about 50% which is 19% ...
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...riented works other than that they have perform similar job decompostions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, whereas, while, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63802114388 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8127690645 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124635522725 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853078470734 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10600660971 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748215629976 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792294152158 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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