U.S. Energy Consumption by fuel

Essay topics:

U.S. Energy Consumption by fuel

The graph includes information from Annual energy Outlook2008 about the amount of energy that derived from 6 different source has been used in the us since 1980 with projection until 2030. The units are measured in Quadrillion.37

Overall, the consumption of energy in the us will be continue to grow and throughout the period fossil fuels play a vital role.23

Most of U.S energy needs have been met by Petrol and oil, with 35q used in 1980 while consumption of coal and natural gas was roughly 15q and 20q respectively. Despite some initial fluctuation, oil consumption rose gradually before reaching 40q in 2012. At this time, we can see many changes in coal and natural gas while both of them is similar now and provide 25q. The prediction show that oil will rise by 10q and coal by7q. By contrast, natural gas is predicted to remain at 2012 figure.89

In 1980, consumption of nuclear, solar/wind, and hydro power stood at 4q. A slightly increase was done in those sources for about a decade. Then atomic energy continue to growth whereas renewable and hydropower fell back to 1980 amount in 2005. Solar is anticipated to rise steadily and hydro is projected to remain stable. both of them provide under 6q in 2030.62

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04739336493 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63095932055 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625592417062 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.1132394002 43.030603864 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 106.5 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255616475197 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701778308709 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952176171008 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161968537973 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093482993784 0.0819641961636 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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