Write a letter to your land lord by asking refund of your security deposit money
- Describe / introduce your self
- you will ask the refund within a timeline
- write about the legal action where needed
Dear Mr David,
Hope you and your family are doing well. My name is H M Zahid, and I rented one of your apartment on Mirpur Road and lived there for a year and left it on 31st October 2020 and before leaving a month earlier notice as per agreement. Now I am writing to you to kindly return the deposit amount which is USD 250. As knowing another information that you flat was the good condition when I left with written clearance.
As per contract security amount settle by notice period but you're requesting as the well good relationship we extend time highest a month then that time expired and I have not to get a refund back.
I believe that you are not holding the money. If I will be not deposited within next week; I have no choice to take legal action for you.
Hope we can solve the problem and maintain our communion.
Yours sincerely,
HM Zahid.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr David, Hope you and your family are doing well....
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rn the deposit amount which is USD 250. As knowing another information that you fl...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...rity amount settle by notice period but youre requesting as the well good relationshi...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ghest a month then that time expired and I have not to get a refund back. I be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42236024845 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31502940278 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708074534161 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.8192159095 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1111111111 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237101017604 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089179603339 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492277908653 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107069596401 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661809070823 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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