Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say
-Describe the problem
- How it is affecting your work
-What needs to be done about it
Respected Sir,
I’m currently working on a high priority task which is supposed to be completed by end of this week. While working on this task, I’m facing a blocker which is hindering my pace. The laptop which I am currently using is crashing at periodic intervals.
After careful analysis I found that the laptop is crashing whenever I’m trying to move it. This also stops even when I bend the top flap. This is the because of battery that is located under the laptop. There is a loose contact that is causing the issue. However, by changing the battery will fix this problem.
I was hoping if I could get a new battery for my existing laptop or get a new laptop so that I can finish my tasks on time without any delay. Please do consider my request at the earliest.
Thanks & Regards,
Vaishnavi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 673.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6095890411 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37369155279 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4498341373 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.1818181818 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2727272727 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0370730715472 0.215688989381 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0145581948157 0.103423049105 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256850394238 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0243980254851 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182802188131 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.57 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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