WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at lea

The future means of household power generation is depicted in the given diagram.

Overall, it can be seen that in the future, every house will be able to produce energy on their own. The process is expected to start from the composting of wastes and will end in the consumption of energy.

Firstly, in the future system three quarters of a steel tank will be filled with composts such as leaves, food, scraps and water. The compost is then fermented and methane gas is formed. Using pipes the gas will be moved to a methane storage facility. Through tubes the gas is then shifted to a compressor where it will be compressed.

In the next stage, the compressed gas is transported to a combustion engine. Mechanical energy from the engine is transferred to a generator, where it will be converted to electrical energy. Then the energy is shifted into an electric energy storage. Finally, electricity from the battery will be used for household purposes.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87195121951 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67272867762 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4381611185 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.6363636364 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0559494529632 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257118522534 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314742542681 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467582119852 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337540138158 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.