The consumption of plastic packaging is increasing day-by-day in our society. Some people, therefore argue that it is up to the manufacturers to decrease the quantity of packaging, while there are others who are of the view that, it would be better if customers stopped buying these products. Both the views will be disscussed inn this essay before arriving at a logical conclusion.
On the one hand, I believe that it is the responsibility of companies to reduce the amount of packaging. This is because there are so many people in our society who are unaware about the negative impacts that plactics have on our environment. For example, a research conducted by the Oxford University press found out that around 40% of people around the globe are unaware about the damaging effect of plastic packaging. So manufacturers should reduce the amount of plastic packaging that is used to store and sell their products, instead they should promote biodegradable, recyclable or environmental friendly materials.
On the other hand, consumers can also play a key role in tackling this issue, by limiting their consumption of products that are packed in non-biodegradable materials. By boycotting certain products they can put pressure on manufacturers who are not using eco-friendly methods. This will force companies to adapt to more sustainable methods of packaging. For instance, in 2015, a company called Frito-Lay changed plastic packaging to biodegradable paper bags in 3 weeks, when consumers started to boycott their products. So it is evident that consumer have the power to save the environment by bringing changes.
In conclusion, there is no doubt about the damaging effects plastic products have on our environment, and I belive that this issue can be ameliorated, if both manufacturers and consumers take equal responsibility.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32534246575 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14905221245 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558219178082 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0458960952 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.615384615 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173483795506 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563610550977 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437902881741 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100406262947 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262838457806 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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