Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to accommodation to stay for 30 days in San Francisco, California.
I am working with Maple Ltd, and I am going to visit the principal office in San Francisco for a work assignment, therefore I need an adequate place to stay around E7 postcode, as it is convenient for me to travel during peak hours.
I would like to stay in a shared apartment, which is close to the tube station. I need a room with a gallery and an attached bathroom. It should have Wi-Fi facilities because sometimes I have to work remotely.
I will be landing at the airport on 12th March 2021 and require a flat for the same day for 30 days, but it depends on my work schedule. I would be grateful if you would furnish your terms and conditions and a rate of the accommodation.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Kind regards,
Mayank Desai
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... for me to travel during peak hours. I would like to stay in a shared apartmen...
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt, which is close to the tube station. I need a room with a gallery and an attac...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ons and a rate of the accommodation. I look forward to hearing from you. Ki...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50310559006 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71132063697 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.2091918123 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5555555556 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224837660803 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805387154131 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601863829068 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120722269533 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051319488155 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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