You are expriencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain1.Why you are writing to him2.Why you cannot pay the rent3.When you will pay the rent.

Dear Mr.Singh,

I am writing to you request that you allow me to pay house rent later in this month.

I have been your tenant from last one year. Since then i have always paid my dues on time. However, this time around the company in which i am working has hold up everyone's salary this month due to some mismatch in their financial records. Everyone is so agitated as salary is their main source of income. After the meeting between employees union and management it has been mutually decided that finances would be cleared by the end of the month.

I can assure you that as soon as my salary is credited i will pay you but not later than 30th of September. I apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by me. I believe this will be acceptable to you. please contact me if it is a problem for you.

Yours faithfully,
Maninder singh

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Singh
Dear Mr.Singh, I am writing to you request that yo...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve been your tenant from last one year. Since then i have always paid my dues on time...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., this time around the company in which i am working has hold up everyones salary...
^
Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...u that as soon as my salary is credited i will pay you but not later than 30th of...
^
Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...you for any inconvenience caused by me. I believe this will be acceptable to you....
^
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...believe this will be acceptable to you. please contact me if it is a problem for you. ...
^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.201183431953 0.268076937826 75% => OK
Verbs: 0.195266272189 0.116061578633 168% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0355029585799 0.0759168565197 47% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0710059171598 0.0366838410393 194% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.130177514793 0.0131127313244 993% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136094674556 0.155750635184 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0532544378698 0.0379272487307 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40547807854 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0295857988166 0.0210936926555 140% => OK
Particles: 0.00591715976331 0.00175180941692 338% => OK
Determiners: 0.0650887573964 0.0948980150116 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0236686390533 0.00437022459523 542% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00591715976331 0.00967000014798 61% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 846.0 1161.00487805 73% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.9 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42307692308 5.90752243213 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.275641025641 0.337110787985 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.198717948718 0.247514529752 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.121794871795 0.171178102325 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0641025641026 0.112407865282 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40547807854 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679487179487 0.546246751206 124% => OK
Word variations: 68.4875084436 49.3433353143 139% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.1818181818 23.0094962315 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9782998989 42.9750493124 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9090909091 135.714022679 57% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 23.0094962315 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.689975730869 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.48048780488 405% => OK
Readability: 34.0536130536 47.7609492067 71% => OK
Elegance: 0.985074626866 2.94281807926 33% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311807185072 0.418131533498 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0585169742786 0.181151798455 32% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0403924960509 0.0850326197045 48% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.497714384155 0.706616315825 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.207947764855 0.157042692854 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109522042916 0.228904883108 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943812491385 0.108899403657 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.118908527397 0.367819155151 32% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.002745616831 0.0812612215331 3% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242159139543 0.316326947829 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100833540241 0.0921553760075 109% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.16585365854 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 1.0 7.1512195122 14% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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