Dear Sir/madam,
I have come a long way from India to Canada to study a short term professional course at your esteemed institute. It is a six months job oriented diploma provided by your college with in-house sharing room in halls of residence. I was very enthusiastic to live in shared accommodation with students from different parts of the world. But on checking-in i found
pathetic conditions at your campus. The brief description is mentioned below.
First and foremost, the state of the room is awful. There is no separate bathroom as well as no proper ventilation anywhere around. It feels like one will be chocked in few hours by staying there. To add on, there is also scarce water supply throughout peak hours. The most of amenities do not match with the facilities mentioned in the brochure. This has resulted in agony for many of many of my fellow students and me. I was not expecting such a low standard from one of the reputed institutions in Canada.
So, it is my humble request to provide me an alternate and better room or upgraded the provided one. I hope concerned authorities will listen to my needs and will chalk out a plan of action at the earliest nor i have to adopt a legal course of action.
Regards,
Maninder
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/madam, I have come a long way from India to Can...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... parts of the world. But on checking-in i found pathetic conditions at your cam...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of the world. But on checking-in i found pathetic conditions at your campus. The ...
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Line 6, column 270, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the amenities') or simply say ''most amenities''.
Suggestion: most of the amenities; most amenities
...water supply throughout peak hours. The most of amenities do not match with the facilities mentio...
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Line 6, column 379, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'many of'.
Suggestion: many of
...rochure. This has resulted in agony for many of many of my fellow students and me. I was not ex...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230125523013 0.268076937826 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.146443514644 0.116061578633 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112970711297 0.0759168565197 149% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0502092050209 0.0366838410393 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0627615062762 0.0131127313244 479% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138075313808 0.155750635184 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0376569037657 0.0379272487307 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72895402721 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0292887029289 0.0210936926555 139% => OK
Particles: 0.00418410041841 0.00175180941692 239% => OK
Determiners: 0.0836820083682 0.0948980150116 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0125523012552 0.00437022459523 287% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1250.0 1161.00487805 108% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.9 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68181818182 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73763899035 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318181818182 0.337110787985 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236363636364 0.247514529752 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181818181818 0.171178102325 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104545454545 0.112407865282 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72895402721 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659090909091 0.546246751206 121% => OK
Word variations: 72.4442367911 49.3433353143 147% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 8.93414634146 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.6666666667 23.0094962315 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3230650851 42.9750493124 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 135.714022679 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 23.0094962315 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.689975730869 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 38.303030303 47.7609492067 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.56451612903 2.94281807926 53% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358148870986 0.418131533498 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0641057810538 0.181151798455 35% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.051577022506 0.0850326197045 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.469517052225 0.706616315825 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134784229581 0.157042692854 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123769994091 0.228904883108 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804494775774 0.108899403657 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.161639878778 0.367819155151 44% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0715042520019 0.0812612215331 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22353378282 0.316326947829 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535561381313 0.0921553760075 58% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.14146341463 350% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.