You have finished a course. Write a letter to the course organizer to give your feedback. In your letter include:
- the details of the course,
- what you enjoyed during the course,
- any suggestions you would have.
Dear Ali,
My name is Tony Smith and student no. is 12345. I am writing this letter to provide feedback of the course I have recently completed.
I have recently completed Bachelor of Information Technology majoring in Networking. The duration of the course was one and half year in which I had to study 18 subjects including 8 core. Let me explain you the most enjoyable subject to me was Project Management 102. I was selected as a project manager and we were 5 members in the team. Actually, it was my first experience of being a leader therefore, I was a bit nervous and excited too. However, my fear was driven by the teacher’s motivation and encouragement. I loved the group presentation which really assisted me to gain self-confidence and enhance presentation skills.
The college had almost every facilities available but the class room was a bit congested due to which we felt as if we were being suffocated on the presentation day. It would have been perfect if the building had a larger room for seminar or presentation.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
Regards,
Begraj
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