You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y

Dearest Meischka,

I hope to have spelled your name in correctness and may this letter finds you in good health. I am consummately charmed to have had the pleasure to share a week long holiday with you and your family. I'm absolutely delighted and thankful for your gracious hospitality and this week has been the highlight of my year.

I anterior present my apologies for my request, should it cause any discomfort or inconvenience to you. On the night of the last day of my holiday, we went out for an alfresco dinner and it was really sweet of you to show me the marketplace. Upon our arrival, I started packing for my journey back home and hurriedly discounted my wallet. It was only after when I had reached home that I realized to have forgotten it erroneously.

I would very much appreciate if you could kindly send it to me on my home address that I have already inscribed on enclosed envelope. You might find my wallet on the mantelpiece in your lounge area. I would not have troubled you, had it been insignificant. But it contains inter alia, my driving license and company card.

I would also love to have the pleasure of you to write to me in the future and wish you would find in your grace, the pleasure to accompany me in your holidays.

Fondly,

Klaus

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... long holiday with you and your family. Im absolutely delighted and thankful for y...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 5.60731707317 910% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57575757576 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67539472302 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580086580087 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1599771976 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0833333333 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380143274194 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137913154565 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879452246169 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246451996125 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493512244174 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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