You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y

Dear Mathews

How are you doing? I hope you are in good of your health even I am top of my world. I just got home safe and sound. It was a great time that I spent with you and your family with great enthusiasm. I am thankful to you for such a great plan.

However, after reached at home I am not find my wallet.
Also I find it in my luggage. I think I forgot it at your home while we were playing a video game in your computer at that time I put it in drawer of dressing table. All my cards like ATM, driving licence, vater card, pan card and some other Bill's of company are in it with some money. They are not confidential but important. I am not worried about because it is in good hand.

Whenever you have time spent it to me in a courier.I enclose my office address with the letter as I spend my more time at my office.

I am waiting to spend more days with you so I am inviting to you to visit my place and I really like to be your host.

I can not wait to see you again my friend.

Best regards,

Manish

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... sound. It was a great time that I spent with you and your family with great enth...
^^
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
...However, after reached at home I am not find my wallet. Also I find it in my luggag...
^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ached at home I am not find my wallet. Also I find it in my luggage. I think I forg...
^^^^
Line 6, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... find it in my luggage. I think I forgot it at your home while we were playing a...
^^
Line 6, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t it at your home while we were playing a video game in your computer at that ti...
^^
Line 6, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mportant. I am not worried about because it is in good hand. Whenever you have...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d about because it is in good hand. Whenever you have time spent it to me in a couri...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...u have time spent it to me in a courier.I enclose my office address with the lett...
^
Line 10, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pend more days with you so I am inviting to you to visit my place and I really li...
^^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e and I really like to be your host. I can not wait to see you again my friend...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, really, so, thus, while, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 5.60731707317 910% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 3.95215311005 4.92477711251 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09071747559 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55023923445 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9252274667 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.0666666667 112.824112599 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303017746914 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104983025611 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857853704961 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167745018403 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107419293989 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.1 13.2329268293 31% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.04 11.4140731707 44% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.25 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 11.0658536585 45% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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