Nowadays, marketers can target potential customer through plethora of advertisements like mobile application, hoardings, television,radio and so on. The ads are specially designed to attract people by promoting the products therefore they can easily catch the attention of society. I advocate the view that advertisements manipulate the buying needs of consumer therefore sell of products increase.
First of all, in this time of advertisements people are carried away by some tempting offer so that they used to buy many unnecessary things. For instance, if one famous celebrity run one advertisement for selling a slimmering belt so overweight people allure to the products idea of losing weight without exercise despite its adverse effect on health. We can see many actresses play role in beauty products ads so that youngsters easily influenced by such ads and buy such product to seem like them.
In Addition, many time only for marketing purpose companies are running some harmful advertisements for tobacco, smoking, alcohol etcetera. Adults can easily catch bad habits like this. Many time it happens that company gives fraudulent information for product for products but people buy such products in sway afterthat they found it unusual and become only showpiece.
On the other hand, advertisements are beneficial for the company for developing it's good reputations well increase the sell. Customers get more benefits like various purchasing options, good discounts, and more informations. Man can compare two different company's products and can choose better, cheaper, and useful products.
To conclude, I would like to say people must buy things which are useful for them. They are not only focusing the tempting ads but also analysis the product for utility and necessity then after buy it so they can stay away from unnecessary products and save both money and time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , radio
...obile application, hoardings, television,radio and so on. The ads are specially design...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...nnecessary things. For instance, if one famous celebrity run one advertisement for selling a sli...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
...belt so overweight people allure to the products idea of losing weight without exercise ...
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hout exercise despite its adverse effect on health. We can see many actresses pla...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many times'.
Suggestion: Many times
... can easily catch bad habits like this. Many time it happens that company gives fraudulen...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tisements are beneficial for the company for developing its good reputations well...
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Line 7, column 290, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...ferent companys products and can choose better, cheaper, and useful products. To co...
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er, and useful products. To conclude, I would like to say people must buy thin...
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Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...would like to say people must buy things which are useful for them. They are not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41016949153 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89571695326 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8388651501 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0706508148488 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317023942586 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273922412392 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483979505562 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194816831586 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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