Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and they can't afford.
What are the reasons for this behaviour?
What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
In this sophisticated era people became materialistic so they wants to buy new things according to trend not according to their necessity. Even though some people trap in debt .There some reasons behind it and it can be prevent if we take care of our financial condition.
We have seen that many youngsters believe in show off they follow their ideal celebrity and buy the things according to them but somewhere adults forgot their own financial condition and became predator of debt. Moreover many people believe in luxurious lifestyle and buy the house ,car and other things so they depend on loan from bank but bank give loan with interest. But somehow they unable to pay the loan for example vijay malya,lalit modi etc. Further more ,some people stuck in wrong Friendship and they have to face some financial issues. Like some college going student demand to their father for car ,bike etc but some of the parents can't depress their son and buy the thing on loan and sometime it will create pressure on parents.
If and parents pay attention on this serious issue then it will more beneficial. Government have to organize companies about money management. Bankers have to understand all the things when people come for loan. Apart from that ,every parent have to teach their children importance of saving, so children habituated since their childhood. People don't take loan if they don't have any consistence income.
In nut shell, Many entrepreneurs get loan from government for business but they have proper planning for debt. If every individuals pay attention on their financial condition and buy the things according to them, Then no one become victim of debt.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
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...nts to buy new things according to trend not according to their necessity. Even t...
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Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rend not according to their necessity. Even though some people trap in debt .There some re...
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Suggestion: There
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...ancial condition. We have seen that many youngsters believe in show off they...
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...ewhere adults forgot their own financial condition and became predator of debt. M...
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...or of debt. Moreover many people believe in luxurious lifestyle and buy the house...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...in luxurious lifestyle and buy the house ,car and other things so they depend on l...
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...vijay malya,lalit modi etc. Further more ,some people stuck in wrong Friendship a...
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Suggestion: ,
...g student demand to their father for car ,bike etc but some of the parents cant d...
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Line 5, column 631, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
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Suggestion: some
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...or car ,bike etc but some of the parents cant depress their son and buy the thing...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... will create pressure on parents. If and parents pay attention on this seri...
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Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...hen it will more beneficial. Government have to organize companies about money manag...
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Line 9, column 229, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...en people come for loan. Apart from that ,every parent have to teach their childre...
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Line 9, column 348, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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...abituated since their childhood. People dont take loan if they dont have any consist...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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...hildhood. People dont take loan if they dont have any consistence income. In nu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99288256228 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48738919885 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1561789703 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.214285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301442053635 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109154137324 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553145939437 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200208329798 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478335020131 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.