You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The pie charts illustrate the proportions of age groups in populations of Italy and Yemen in 2000 and predictions for 2050.

In Yemen, initially half of the population was 14 years of age or younger, which was followed by 46.3% of the population belonging to the 15-59 years age group. However, after 5 decades, the latter is expected to increase, accounting for a little over 57% of the population whereas the former will decrease to take up slightly more than one third. People aged 60 and above occupy small percentages in both years.

In Italy, more than 60% of the population aged from 15 to 59 years old, which was followed by the figures for those in the over 60 group and less than 15 group (24.1% and 14.3%, respectively). Unlike Yemen, in 2005, it is expected that the population will age as there will be comparable numbers of people more than 60 years of age and those aged 15- 59 (accounting for 42.3% and 46.2%, respectively). The youngest age group is predicted to shrink in size, taking up a little over 11%.

In conclusion, it is interesting to note that in the years reported, populations of both countries are predicted to be mostly at the age 15 to 59.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, third, whereas, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61904761905 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68498808149 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509523809524 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1423669962 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143620421216 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822492305607 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720473187339 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124184214576 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799370919089 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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