You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, a small number of people allocate time for their hobbies. This is because life is getting way hareder, and human being are more to be addicted to social media. Also, this could adversely affect human beings mental health and their community.
On the one hand, since life is getting more demanding, aslo, people have to work more than ever before to live, some individuals only are devoting time for their avocations. This is can be related to many reasons, firstly, due to the life pressure, many human beings have lack of time management skill. In addition, the advanced technology in general and social media applications in specific have become increasingly addictive, hence, humans are more likely to spend their time on social media tools. For example, a recent study shows that %75 of adults spend their time after work on Facebook and Twitter.
On the other hand, lossing passion for leisure interests can cause issues for individuals and their community. Regarding people, in these days more psychiatric diseases such as depression are facing humans. For instance, the world health organization has admitted that more people have been diagnosed with depression as they lost passion in their life, and in fact this is because they did not have time to spend on leisure activites. Moreover, it has effects on societies as well, as countries are lossing their cultures because people are far busier and concentrate on their work-life rather than their hobbies which can boosts the nations' traditions.
In conclusion, while less individulas have allocated time on their amusement activites, negative impacts have affected them and their community. This essay discussed why only few people devote time to hobbies, and what are the effects that could be caused in this situation on humans and countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
Nowadays, a small number of people allocate time for their hobbies....
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich can boosts the nations traditions. In conclusion, while less individulas ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 965.302439024 159% => OK
No of words: 295.0 196.424390244 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19322033898 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53833804122 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 106.607317073 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545762711864 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 283.868780488 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2954584043 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3076923077 5.23603664747 254% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180341386226 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076663843701 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626906771373 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132706894746 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338539172362 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 40.7170731707 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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