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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up to the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
Have you ever wondered how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology is able to produce reliable forecasts based on up-to-the-minute information? Well, let me tell you that there are 4 major steps involved in making sure that the weather updates are delivered quickly and accurately.
First of all, there is the matter of incoming information culled from sources such as satellites, radars and drifting buoys. Secondly, analysis and forecasting is done through the use of the following instruments: a satellite photo, a radar screen and a synoptic chart. Third on the list is preparing for the broadcast using the analysis and forecasting tools earlier mentioned and feeding the information gathered to the computer. The final step is the broadcast in itself where the data gathered is shared either through a television newsreader, the radio or through a recorded announcement.
All in all, these steps make up for the effective collection, processing and transmission of weather forecasts that are reliable and up to date. Thus, benefiting the people who surely need guidance from precise news that affects how they go about their normal and regular lives.
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...are delivered quickly and accurately. First of all, there is the matter of inc...
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...o about their normal and regular lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thus, well, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29347826087 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96673427987 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 12.0208152802 43.030603864 28% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.75 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22077605621 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091102839432 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113630075413 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155267664736 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952245058438 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.