You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood.
Write a letter to the gym’s manager. In your letter
* ask what types of membership there are and what the prices are
* ask what activities are available
* ask what the procedure is for joining
Dear Sir,
Since the day I arrived to this place, I have been hearing lot about your gym popularity. But, unfortunately due to the job work commitment could not get enough time to join personally.
However, from the next week onwards as I would be having some leisure time in the evening, I am very much interested to join your gym. Actually, before that I have certain queries in my mind for which I need your help. Firstly, what are the different kinds of memberships that your gym offers? How much each of these memberships cost? Moreover, what is the minimum and maximum duration one can avails the membership.
Undeniably, most of the gyms nowadays, provide some basic gym facilities like yoga, physical exercises and aerobics. Is the same kind of facilities are available in your gym or you provide only the basic activities.
As I am new to this place, so not sure what are the normal processes that are required for joining as a member. Additionally, is there any kind of address proof required for the joining? I would be thankful, if you could help to answer these basic questions for me.
I look forward to hearing soon from you.
Yours Faithfully
Michael
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due to the job work commitment could not get enough time to join personally.
due to the job work commitment, I could not get enough time to join personally.
I am very much interested to join your gym.
I am very interested in your gym.
one can avails the membership.
one can avail the membership.
Is the same kind of facilities are available in your gym
are the same kind of facilities available in your gym
so not sure what are the normal processes
so I am not sure what are the normal processes
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