Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to help with environmental projects in your area.
Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter:
Describe a local environmental issue that affects you
Explain what you would like to do to help
Suggest how the problem could be avoided in the future
Dear Sir / Ma'am,
I am writing this letter in regards with the advertisement you posted on local daily Tribute 3days ago. I am John a resident of Pennsville Suburb for the past 4 years. I am myself a plumber cum land surveyor.
There are 2 things, that is currently causing trouble to the local residents, the sand dust due to the strip on both sides of the road being uncovered with grass and the car wrecker workshop producing fumes of grinding all the time. On an average I have to wipe my floors twice a day due to the sand dust and couldn’t open the windows due to the fumes. This has been the issue for the last 1 year ever since the road department paved new roads and the workshop was commenced. My neighbours too expressed the hardship they are facing due to these.
I have recently started learning gardening for my backyard which has a huge space of 25m2 successfully implementing grass around the pathway. I think if I am teamed with 2 more hands I will be able to plant the grass along the strips which will curb the sand dust. Moreover, in the case of grinding fumes I can bring the 24 homes together for resolution discussion with the workshop owner. To my knowledge if they can dedicate a chamber space with high raised chimneys it could be mitigated successfully.
To reduce these issues stemming up in the future I would strongly suggest for the road department, to implement the conditional requirement of strips being planted with lawn grade grass to their road construction contractors. In case of workshop the local council should design laws that will make them to consider approval from local residents for their activity in the vicinity.
I will be anticipating for your follow-up in this matter. I also thank you personally for bringing up these projects through media channels. Your efforts are highly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 34, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to garden'.
Suggestion: to garden
...se. I have recently started learning gardening for my backyard which has a huge space ...
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Line 6, column 478, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...space with high raised chimneys it could be mitigated successfully. To reduce ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 5.60731707317 642% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 965.302439024 162% => OK
No of words: 326.0 196.424390244 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79447852761 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67930051591 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 106.607317073 182% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 283.868780488 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.7705759567 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9411764706 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11764705882 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146031072486 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538138159216 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616350717615 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816372555395 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558364625366 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 40.7170731707 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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