04.10.2017
work with mistakes. Your colleague from a different town is coming next month and you are moving out of your current accommodation. Write a letter to the colleague to recommend they move into your house and say
– Why are you moving to another house?
– Describe your present accommodation.
– Explain why it will suit your colleague.
Dear John,
I heard from our colleagues you are being transferred to Dallas next month and I would like to help you with accommodation.
Recently, I got married and we decided to start our marital life in a new house. We are going to take a mortgage on a newly built two-story house that is situated on the outskirts of the megalopolis in a peaceful and calm neighborhood. In fact, the credit has been approved and we are going to move in soon. So, my old apartment will be available for rent.
The flat I recommend is located in a spectacular place. There is a riverside that is well-maintain and a big beautiful park.
Moreover, there are two cinema theaters, three nice restaurants, a gym and a big department store. In other words, all needed infrastructure and services are conveniently located nearby.
Furthermore, the landlord is a decent, old woman who will not cause you any troubles and the rent is reasonable. In average, apartments in this neighborhood cost about eight hundred dollars per month but the lady charges only five hundred.
If you like my idea, I will talk to the landlord as soon as I get your consent.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
They should be in the same room:
a newly built two-story house that is situated on the outskirts of the megalopolis in a peaceful and calm neighborhood.
The flat I recommend is located in a spectacular place. There is a riverside that is well-maintain and a big beautiful park.
or one is not necessary to put.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 203 250
No. of Characters: 920 1200
No. of Different Words: 133 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.775 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.532 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.836 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 52 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 45 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.571 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.276 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.638 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8078817734 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9457716194 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660098522167 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2154820713 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0769230769 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160743759703 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041465767804 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629665647702 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077722670822 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802793651776 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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