07.11.2017 A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening.Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and

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07.11.2017 A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house
tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening

Dear Sarah,

I am writing to inform you I will not be able to meet you at the train station. However, I have made all arrangements to make you arrival convenient. Before I left the home, I had given a set of keys from the house to my neighbor Mrs. Smith. You may take the keys from her. She usually spends all day in her garden; so, you’d better phone her otherwise she will not hear you. Her cell phone number is +19008008989. She will give you three keys, the biggest one is used to open the entrance door. The lock in this door has a secret and to open it you will need to turn it once on the left and then three times on the right.

There are two ways to get to my place. Firstly, you can use public transport. The closest bus stop to the train station is located near the main entrance. You should take a bus number four and then get off at the fifth stop. When you left the coach, you should turn around and my house will be right in front of you. Another way to get to the destination is to take a taxi cab but this ride may cost you a small fortune.

I will be home at 10:00 pm. I think that by the time I arrive you will have become really hungry because my fridge is completely empty. So, on my way home, I will purchase a big pizza and some wine; After we have a decent dinner, we can watch your favorite movie on DVD if you want.

See you soon.

Your brother Eugene.

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Average: 7.8 (3 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, so, then, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 277.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.05776173285 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04980410801 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1146311429 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.1578947368 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5789473684 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.94845360825 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345166077019 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111210495227 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069597662831 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196544066381 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737140997069 0.0580467560999 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.68 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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flaws:
it is not outstanding, like:

Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 279 350
No. of Characters: 1067 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.087 4.7
Average Word Length: 3.824 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.899 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 46 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 26 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 12 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.95 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.261 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.45 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.325 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.567 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.245 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5