07/11/2017A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening.Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and g

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07/11/2017
A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house
tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening

Dear Sarah,

I am writing to inform you I will not be able to meet you at the train station. However, I have made all arrangements to make you arrival convenient. A set of keys to my house I am going to give to my neighbor Mrs. Smith. She usually spends all day in her garden; so, you may take the keys from her. There are three keys and the biggest one is used to open the entrance door. The lock has a secret and to open it you will need to turn it once on the left and then three times on the right.

You can get to my place by public transport. In front of the train station, a bus stop is located, you should take a bus number four and then get off at the fifth stop. When you left the coach, you should turn around and my house will be right in front of you. Another way to get to the destination is to take a taxi cab but this ride may cost you a small fortune.

I will return to the city at 10:00 pm on the day of your arrival. On my way home I will purchase a tasty pizza and some wine. So, we will have a decent dinner. Then if you want, we can watch your favorite movie on DVD.

See you soon.

Your brother Eugene.

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Average: 7.1 (3 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 3.88461538462 4.54256449028 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94665976931 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5536797088 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.8125 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.94845360825 329% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311602070192 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105903628975 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656677082507 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172728281548 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573689270506 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.63 8.71597938144 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.09 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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A set of keys to my house I am going to give to my neighbor Mrs. Smith.
description: what is the verb for 'A set of keys to my house'?

flaws:
the essay is not outstanding, like:

difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 235 250
No. of Characters: 862 1200
No. of Different Words: 132 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.915 4.7
Average Word Length: 3.668 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.831 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 33 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 20 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 8 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 4 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.824 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.213 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.412 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.325 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.602 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.222 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5