16/10/2017 You cannot pick your friend up at the airport. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter, you should
explain the reasons.
You should provide him/her with alternative ways to go to the hotel.
You should inform him/her of your plan.
Dear John,
I know I promised to meet you at the airport but it is literally impossible because I have a scheduled business trip to Hawaii on 29th March 2017, the day you arrive. The Hawaii journey is crucial for my career because if everything goes well, I may be promoted to a position of a head of the management department.
You can get to your hotel via public transportation. There is a bus service provided that may transfer you from the main airport building to the historic centre of the city than you will need to take a tram to your hotel that is situated nearby. Another alternative is my colleague who stays in the megalopolis may give you a ride to the hotel but I am not sure whether you would like to interact with a stranger.
As far as I remember, you are going to stay in Moscow for at least one month. Although I cannot meet you when you arrive, my trip will have been finished by 1st April. So, when I return, I intend to show you the most interesting landmarks and attractions of the capital and, of course, to help you make new acquaintances that could be beneficial for your future. Finally, in the middle of April, a group of friends and I are going to do some hiking in the red forest that is situated in Moscow region, I hope that you will take part in this outdoor activity as well.
I am waiting for your prompt response.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
There is a bus service provided that may transfer you from the main airport building to the historic centre of the city than you will need to take a tram to your hotel that is situated nearby.
There is a bus service provided to transfer you from the main airport building to the historic centre of the city, and then you will need to take a tram to your hotel that is situated nearby.
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flaws:
words are repeated:
hotel that is situated nearby.
red forest that is situated in Moscow region
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 259 350
No. of Characters: 1099 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.012 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.243 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.502 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 48 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.923 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.986 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.358 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.757 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.231 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, well, at least, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58729899096 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8845808425 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.272727273 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310254611325 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119778082405 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684356984722 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174922424975 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826861890722 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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