I am a patron of your bank and am writing this letter to you to report the loss of my credit card and also to provide me a new one in place of it swiftly. Allow me to elaborate the circumstances in which it was lost for your better comprehension.
Last week, I visited Delhi as it was a sheer business trip for which I was suppose to meet many clients and travel to various places there. So, I hired a taxi for this purpose and I can explicitly reminisce that my valet in which the card was present was kept on the back seat of the car. However, when I deboarded it after reaching the airport, I forgot to collect it from there.
Although, the complaint has already been filed in the local police station but it would take quite a long time for its recovery. Hence, I want you to block that card immediately so that no one can misuse it. Also, kindly arrange a new one for me on an urgent basis since my work is being hindered because of the absence of a credit card.
Your expedite action can assist in redressing this matter soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: AM_I
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
... Sir, I am a patron of your bank and am writing this letter to you to report th...
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
...s a sheer business trip for which I was suppose to meet many clients and travel to vari...
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...isce that my valet in which the card was present was kept on the back seat of the...
Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
... matter soon. Yours faithfully, John
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31862745098 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38658040961 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622549019608 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.0042854956 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193081008311 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744285710756 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065396480966 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111404974268 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085338049408 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.