After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appre

Essay topics:

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.

In your letter:

Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
Express your appreciation
And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Dear Mr Smith,

I hope this letter finds you and your family in a good health. I am Paul, whom you saved from the serious road mishap a week ago. Unfortunately, my car now is broken, and my shoulder has a minor injury. If you did not provide me with the first aids, I would suffer from severe injuries. Hence, I am writing this letter to you in order to tell you I am so grateful for your help.

In fact, I would like to seize the opportunity to invite you and your family to come to my humble house my wife is eager to see you and your family. I will be absolutely delighted if you accept my invitation. Once again, thank you, I really appreciate what you did for me. There are no suitable words that can describe my appreciation.

I am looking forward to meeting you.

Yours sincerely.
Paul

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, really, so, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 657.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32236842105 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45414137797 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7901174935 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34560257179 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139336817761 0.0766984524023 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836989776555 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234142990598 0.12726935374 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476728174053 0.0580467560999 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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