You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making arrangements.

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You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making arrangements.

Dear Sir,

I have a tantalising, which means, an exciting prospect of holiday making in a famed hotel like your Island Resorts. I am a from New York who took time off from work to make it to Bali along with my family. Hence, I’m requesting you to make the following arrangements:

My ebullient, energetic and happy family consists of four members i.e. I, my wife and two children aged between 12-15 years. I need a double suit rooms within an average budget on the top floor overlooking the ocean with attached balcony so that we can sit and enjoy the panorama. I need the everything immaculate e.g. fresh towels, clean linen, tidy beds and a repellent would come handy just in case if there are any mosquitoes.

Coming to food; my family loves multi-cuisine restaurants. My last need for the day is, I want to lease a Mercedes class vehicle to transport my family while we are there.

Hope all of this could be arranged with ease and if you have any queries, please free to contact me.

Sincerely,

Jack Dan

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[3]
Message: Did you mean 'form'?
Suggestion: form
... hotel like your Island Resorts. I am a from New York who took time off from work to...
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Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'everything'?
Suggestion: the; everything
... can sit and enjoy the panorama. I need the everything immaculate e.g. fresh towels, clean lin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., hence, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71978021978 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57975078576 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.741758241758 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0044442469 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128085408221 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436511902115 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476009922951 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702652435025 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673051573885 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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