Application to Bank for Loan approval
Sir,
This is to apply for a small business loan for an amount of 100 thousand Dollars.
The loan amount requested will be used to lease a warehouse to store apparels of men, women and kids.
The have checked for the availability of some of the warehouses near the Beacon Hills Industrial area.
Also refer to the quotes available for leases available in nearby societies.
1. ABC Warehouses $90,000
2. BGRT Storage $95,000
I have also attached my income proofs and Identity verification along with this application.
Kindly review the application and provide me the approval for disbursal of at least 100 thousand dollars as loan, I do agree all the terms and conditions as per the Bank’s loans guidelines.
Regards
Nitin Gupta
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Date Branch manager 11/01/2018 XYZ bank Subject: Application for app...
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Line 10, column 42, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...he have checked for the availability of some of the warehouses near the Beacon Hills Indust...
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Line 13, column 25, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$90'.
Suggestion: $90
...ame Quotes 1. ABC Warehouses $ 90,000 2. BGRT Storage $ 95,000 ...
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Line 14, column 23, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$95'.
Suggestion: $95
...s $ 90,000 2. BGRT Storage $ 95,000 I have also attached my income p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oans guidelines. Regards Nitin Gupta
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 143.0 315.596192385 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63636363636 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77777830625 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699300699301 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6649775999 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42509390658 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132746960952 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171033439333 0.0667982634062 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128487491313 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184047584644 0.056905535591 323% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.84 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.