Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology, and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take an interest in the arts?
Art represents the culture of the country. Nowadays people are reducing their interest in these courses and more interested in other subjects such as maths, management, technology, and science. This essay further explains the reasons and solutions for the same concerns.
There are many reasons behind this, firstly the arts are not encouraged by the Government to providing job opportunities for these people. People doing artwork are the below poverty level. So, people stop choosing the arts as the main subject. Hence, moving to other topics where there are many opportunities and can see their further future. Secondly, they don’t get much money by selling artwork. For example, in India at the Ganesh Chaturthi festival, the need to prepare idle of Lord Ganesha will take around 5 to 6 months. Whereas, the artists will receive a very little amount of money which will be not sufficient for daily needs at least. Also, they don’t have the right place to sell things.
there are many solutions but the most preferable is the Government needs to take further actions to give enough support. By adding the Arts as a mandatory subject in education either in primary or secondary schools. By raising more employment in this sector. Conducting the campaigns to explain the values of art and the importance of it in the culture. Need to pass the rules on the price values of artwork done by the artistic. They can help to provide enough space for selling things in each city or village.
To sum up, all together Arts is the representation of our culture. Thus, every individual together with Govt needs to know the worth of it and support the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, at least, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.925 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54670405242 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2588217229 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5789473684 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7368421053 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149643402423 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480964783185 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04958094463 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893984568286 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305037487487 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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