A builder did some repairs in your house recently and you are unhappy with their quality. Write a letter to the builder’s manager and explain:
– What did they do?
– Why do you think the quality is unacceptable?
– Suggest a solution for the situation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
A builder from your office came to my house a few days back, to work on some repairs, and I am writing to express my displeasure in the work he did.
What he worked on includes a leaking wall and some damaged tiles, both in my living room. There was a damaged pipe behind the wall that was sipping water into the dining area and your workman did a great job by tracing the leakage and fixing the damaged pipes. Indeed, I commend him for the sheer determination he showed. To trace the leaking pipe, he had to break the walls from the dining to the entrance of the parlor and I was quite happy that he found the pipe and replaced it with new one.
However, upon completion of this work, he left the surface of the walls very rough. It was not properly plastered and anybody can tell that some work was done on those areas. In view of this, I am suggesting that you send someone back to the house to scrape the walls and plaster it again, and I expect all these work to be done at the expense of your company.
Finally, I am going to host some visitors in three weeks time, and would love this work to be completed before then. Please do not disappoint me as I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Okoronkwo Alfred Chinedu.
Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'however', 'look', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211320754717 0.220444632235 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.184905660377 0.167888034529 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0188679245283 0.0606518309736 31% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0603773584906 0.0506257000042 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0981132075472 0.118615021944 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0981132075472 0.107062808482 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0528301886792 0.041066498444 129% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.18951139734 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0452830188679 0.0385302599488 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.120754716981 0.0714148451538 169% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00754716981132 0.0191574576366 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00754716981132 0.00930345855455 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1277.0 1141.60824742 112% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.134020619 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29875518672 5.53046319177 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78085437643 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.248962655602 0.284621296913 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.170124481328 0.211203875043 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0788381742739 0.133321485273 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0373443983402 0.0843313296314 44% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.18951139734 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593360995851 0.622163163488 95% => OK
Word variations: 60.3363847477 62.8969750728 96% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 21.9090909091 16.4300151701 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6928304326 44.7399317507 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.090909091 90.9928171075 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 16.4300151701 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.613754768223 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 38.9215390419 37.5504026743 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.05494505495 1.13073093955 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355941198054 0.331212695627 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131522369476 0.0927372745006 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0879024129071 0.0736520305886 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.658700387242 0.579516596996 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.227404924363 0.180689518051 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134934388859 0.122183219658 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831509159594 0.0765303033291 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.224342453636 0.211926503985 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.154176994043 0.0737400523855 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177192341163 0.203819188451 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102497793011 0.067151250289 153% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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