The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart depicts the outcome of a survey about people's preference towards buying coffee and tea and drinking habits in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart.
Overall, most people prefer going to a cafe rather than buying instant or fresh coffee. Additionally, in the last 4 weeks, fresh coffee was the least bought in all five cities. City residence is measured in percentage.
Firstly, people going to a cafe is just above 60% in Sydney and almost 65% in Melbourne. However, buying instant and fresh coffee are only just above 45% and approximately 44% respectively. We can see that in Melbourne the percentage is close to Sydney (approximately 48% and 43%). In Brisbane, it is seen that instant coffee is also bought as often as going to a cafe for coffee(almost 56% and 53% respectively).
Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in Adelaide is 50% for buying instant coffee and just below 50% who goes to a cafe for coffee in the past few weeks. As expected, buying fresh coffee is almost 35% in the last 4 weeks. However, in Hobart, approximately 37% of people tend to buy fresh coffee. In the past few weeks, most people in Hobart went to a cafe (almost63%) than buying instant coffee (54%).

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Average: 7.3 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 403, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...most63% than buying instant coffee 54%.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77511961722 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66693946393 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488038277512 0.622605031667 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6709732902 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307984066985 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112622924423 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100837644358 0.0603063233224 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210807918838 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118094121414 0.0580467560999 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 403, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...most63% than buying instant coffee 54%.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77511961722 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66693946393 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488038277512 0.622605031667 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6709732902 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307984066985 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112622924423 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100837644358 0.0603063233224 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210807918838 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118094121414 0.0580467560999 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.