A close friend is coming to visit you he/she has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area.
- Write a letter to your friend . In your letter ask more details about your friend's plans.
- Suggest some places to visit and things to do in your hometown.
- Tell your friend about food or drink he/she should try during his/her stay.
Write at least 150 words.
Begin your letter with Dear ________
Dear Moses,
Concerning to your letter, please be informed that we all are fine. We hope that you and your family are also well. I am very delightful and happy when I learned that you are touring Dubai. Further to your concerns regarding suggestions, I would like to suggest various attractions and activities which may interest you more and more.
To commence, you may visit Jumeriah beach where you can enjoy Ski Diving, boating, swimming in the sea, resorts and restaurants. Besides Jumeriah beach you may find many shops for clothes, shoes, jewellery, furniture and much more. Furthermore, the world-famous malls such as Dubai Mall, Mall Of Emirates and IBN Battuta for leisure, shopping, eating, Cinemas etc. Moreover, the Atlantis Hotel built between the sea. You can book a room in that hotel at your convenience as it has the best ambience, beach and other amenities in comparison to other hotels in Dubai. However, Dubai has lots of variety in terms of food and drink. As a result, all the type of food is available throughout Dubai.
I hope I have elaborated as per your expectation. However, I would like to invite you to spend a day with us. It will be our pleasure to serve you our best.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...n I learned that you are touring Dubai. Further to your concerns regarding suggestions,...
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Line 9, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... leisure, shopping, eating, Cinemas etc. Moreover, the Atlantis Hotel built betwe...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88584474886 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60426135125 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625570776256 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6073994823 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.875 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6875 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238473698451 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777474799179 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583507090909 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131960115264 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655066126113 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.