A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company.
In your letter:
describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir,
Concerning your question regarding sponsoring either the sports for two years or two concerts. however, in my opinion, both are beneficial at different levels.
On the first hand, nowadays football becoming more and more popular in our area and our team because of the scarcity of funds unable to participate at the state level championship. however, you can spend or allocate some funds for them to participate. Alternatively, you can spend money to introduce sports club for indoor games or football foundation for lifetime benefits significantly.
On the other hand, concerts are also advantageous in terms of screening promotions and advertisements on televisions. Broadcasting concert on-air would benefit you to promote or advertise to the people outside our area.
Organise one concert instead of two, for the sake of entertainment and spend the rest of the money for introducing sports club or football foundation for one year in our area.
Yours Faithfully,
Moses Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, regarding, so, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46794871795 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07555391546 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0082735035 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7777777778 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292749288136 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112789209017 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11301195079 0.0603063233224 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18116567017 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959868236352 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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