Dear Sir,
I am writing with regard to the proposed closure of cafeteria, which in my opine would impact a significant number of staff like me who are living without family and rely on food cooked here.
Since last year, it has been found that footfall to cafeteria is declined abruptly. This is because the new vendor prices are much higher as compared with the earlier one. Moreover, manpower count of our company has been gained enormously but the sitting capacity is lesser, due to which people are looking outside.
I believe that replacing the vendor with the one who could provide a good variety in budget could attract the staff to access it. Even, cafeteria can be shifted to terrace which is significantly larger and from where people can enjoy a good view of nearby mountains.
I strongly assert that you will give due consideration to this letter before making a concrete decision.
Yours sincerely,
Tim Cook.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e the new vendor prices are much higher as compared with the earlier one. Moreover...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94303797468 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4738092923 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.721518987342 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7453523426 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104534413815 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370475379039 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253372424404 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610652914681 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167185213935 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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