The given column chart illustrates information in the number of hours spent per week on unpaid job between maried women and men.
It can be clearly seen that there are unequally unequally distributes between female and male from all the three categories (without children, with 1 – 2 children, with 3 or more children)
Maried woman without children have just 30 hours of unpaid work. But the more children women have, the more time they spend. This turns more than 50 hours for women with 1 – 2 children and about 60 hours for women with 3 or more kids. The data of hours use by females who has 3 children is the highest.
On another hand, the figure of unpaid task done by males does change with the number of kids they have. There is lower plenty than women. In fact, it is observed that maried men with 3 or more children spend slightly less number of unpaid work hours, just 15 hours per week.
In conclusion, maried women are doing more hours of unpaid job compared to maried men irrespective of their number of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58288770053 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24527617912 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550802139037 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6041847692 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2222222222 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136853518609 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685621353105 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557988863665 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957959730035 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561312928881 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.