During a recent plane Journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. Remind him when and where you met. Tell him what kind of job you are interested in. Say why you think you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Mr salami,
I, Zeinab Khalaj, met you last month on the plane having a trip to Toronto. I am writing to remind you your word to give me a job opportunity in your business. I had sat next to you and there was a really interesting conversation about your chain of restaurants. As I am a PhD graduated industrial engineer who teaches applicable courses such as “quality management” and “Project management” at university, you were interested in applying me in your firm. To be exact we spoke about mechanising jobs in the restaurants, including serving food, paying the bills, and giving the orders. So you asked me to write this letter to you and remind you the appointment and ask for the job to manage this process. It is inevitable that you may have forgotten some details. So, I should mention that I have passed some courses and even had been intern in this field in “Amazon”, for a while. And I am sure that my professional team, including two university professors and three PhD graduated engineers, is completely capable of launching the programme and starting the process. I am looking forward hearing from you. And I will appreciate it if you could let us to do it for you.
Sincerely yours,
Zeinab Khalaj
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, really, so, while, mind you, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74418604651 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97093910707 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623255813953 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8960678464 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247253336597 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933321756951 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735174919001 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252276789428 0.12726935374 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.