During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talk to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman. In your Letter•

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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talk to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your Letter
• Remind him when and where you met
• Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
• Say why you think you would be suitable for the job

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 7.5pt; font-size: medium; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal; line-height: 19.8pt;"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri; color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">Mr. John,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 7.5pt; font-size: medium; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal; line-height: 19.8pt;"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri; color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">I hope this letter will find you in radiant health. I am writing you to remind the encounter we had in Delhi airport, while boarding Air India flight A50F4 on 2<sup>nd</sup>August 2019. We had same colour of laptop bags of VIP brand, where we started interacting each other.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 7.5pt; font-size: medium; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal; line-height: 19.8pt;"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri; color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">As we know, you have a restaurant business all across the India and you had a plan for expansion in Punjab. Yesterday, I saw your new branch opened in Lawrence Road, Amritsar. Congratulations on achieving one more fate! On having an opportunity, I want to apply for a job in your restaurant for the post of manager.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 7.5pt; font-size: medium; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal; line-height: 19.8pt;"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri; color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">It is of the utmost importance that I would look for upliftment in job profile. I have been working as Assistance manager in Brothers restaurant Amritsar, which is known as countries one of the oldest restaurant from last 5 years. Having experience in hand and light headed personality will help me in handle the chaos professionally.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 7.5pt; font-size: medium; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal; line-height: 19.8pt;"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri; color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">I hope you will consider my request and opt for prompt reply.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 7.5pt; font-size: medium; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal; line-height: 19.8pt;"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri; color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">Yours Sincerely,&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 7.5pt; font-size: medium; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal; line-height: 19.8pt;"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri; color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">John Wick<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2752.0 937.175257732 294% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 383.0 206.0 186% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.18537859008 4.54256449028 158% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 3.78020617076 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.18805345287 2.54303337028 243% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.381201044386 0.622605031667 61% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 290.88556701 216% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 16.3608247423 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 344.648652801 44.8134815571 769% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 393.142857143 76.5299724578 514% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.7142857143 16.8248392259 325% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.02980258491 0.216113520407 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028175355061 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0125166498094 0.0603063233224 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.02980258491 0.12726935374 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.8 8.37731958763 475% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 70.7449484536 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 3.82989690722 446% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 7.45979381443 327% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 25.31 8.71597938144 290% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 8.62886597938 243% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 8.54432989691 276% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 8.15463917526 294% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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