During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a business man who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
• Remind him when and where you met
• Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
• Say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing regarding your recommendation about a possible vacancy in one of your branches in London.
I am confident that you would recall me, as I sat next to you on the flight of 17th March 2018 from Sydney to London. We had a long conversation throughout the flight, and you described your business and ownership of a chain of restaurants. You eventually issued me your contact details generously suggesting me to explain my working interests and the scope of skills and abilities in writing, hopefully being convincing to recruitment in your London branch.
If I may suggest any role, I would like to work as a waiter for following reasons. Firstly, I enjoy a three year working experience as a waiter in Sydney assuring my personal abilities such as linguistic and interpersonal skills essential for the role. These assets enable me to establish a good rapport with everyone in workplace ranging from customers to other members of staff. I also think that I physically fit the descriptions of the job because, as you noticed, I am tall and rather muscular clearly making me adequately strong to work during rush hours without any considerable problem.
I would appreciate the opportunity of involving in your workforce, and I look forward to receiving your response.
Kind Regards,
Hamed hajinia
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98749466664 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628959276018 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1210679865 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199460019441 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07291879882 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682841756183 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1131296847 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774916000229 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.